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Drooling Destiny !

16 Oct

 

Destiny is a lady,

fragile and frivolous;

a woman with volatile wings

and violent fangs !

 

she is alluring

naked and inviting

seducing the the mankind

hold their noses between her thighs

and while spreading odour of ecstasy ,

just close her crossed legs

to crush all heads tempted !

 

she loves

taste of dark sinful chocolates

and

surprises !

playing with innocent hearts

and preying tranquillized souls

dancing in cold night

with fire in her pout.

 

destiny is a lady

cruel and jealous

hungry and bloodthirsty

feeds herself

with human hopes,

and

always survives

on diet of smiles !

 

 

( this poem obviously bitten by Shakespearean bug hidden in my bones, suddenly erupted tonight after a line born in my FB status.  Now  i am ogling the lava here, so you may flamed by its random combustion…😛 )

 
26 Comments

Posted by on October 16, 2012 in art & literature, personal

 

26 responses to “Drooling Destiny !

  1. vandana

    October 16, 2012 at 3:39 AM

    good poem.

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  2. rajnikant shah

    October 16, 2012 at 7:07 AM

    appreciate your frank opinions

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  3. YASH

    October 16, 2012 at 8:09 AM

    too good sir ji…:)

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  4. Mohsin Vasi

    October 16, 2012 at 9:26 AM

    destiny is your mind
    some time cruel,some time kind
    this depends on human hopes
    and always act
    what it thinks correct.

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  5. vrajesh

    October 16, 2012 at 9:34 AM

    very dark truth

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  6. shethsir

    October 16, 2012 at 9:41 AM

    The death of divine destiny is omnipotent,
    Destined lives are deprived of divinity.

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  7. priynikeeworld

    October 16, 2012 at 9:43 AM

    what an erotic, artistic and sarcastic poem !!!! destiny f…. all. crushed by destiny we can know our ownselves😉

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  8. Sayli Lande

    October 16, 2012 at 9:55 AM

    Very True.. Loved the last STANZA…..

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  9. Tapan Shah

    October 16, 2012 at 10:57 AM

    50 % jevi samjani..navratri na diwaso mate barabar chhe..aa punchs

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  10. jigisha79

    October 16, 2012 at 11:35 AM

    …nd still some ppl manage too f*#$ her.. !!

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  11. teju144

    October 16, 2012 at 11:50 AM

    oh i m proud to be a lady !!!.. as i do share my feminism with d DESTINY…MAA DURGA MAA CHANDI CHAAMUNDI…RAMBHAA NE RATI BADHAAYE BHEGA AAVI GAYA AA KAVITA MA KYANK…BEAUTIFUL…

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  12. Kunal Shah

    October 16, 2012 at 12:48 PM

    Outstanding Sir. How thoughtful you are.

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  13. Karim

    October 16, 2012 at 1:27 PM

    yu can f**k her……. bt most of the time yu are getting F**kd……. hard fact…

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    • jigisha79

      October 16, 2012 at 3:15 PM

      noooo …its technically not possible…coz destiny is a lady !!😀 ( just kidding pls dont mind🙂

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  14. maharshi

    October 16, 2012 at 1:35 PM

    nice and senseous poem. ‘saru chhe koi kattarpanthi aa photos joto nathi, nahintar m.f.hussain ni jem deshvatto karavat’

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  15. Envy

    October 16, 2012 at 2:11 PM

    awesome is the only word came to mind🙂 kudos and waiting for more…more…more

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  16. Swati

    October 16, 2012 at 2:28 PM

    ”she loves taste of dark sinful chocolates and surprises !”….What a beautiful line! ”….always survives on diet of smiles!”…..wah! Saras, taja ane raseela kalpano..carry on!🙂

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  17. Hardik Majithiya

    October 16, 2012 at 3:02 PM

    delicious is the word that comes in my mind after reading this poem because it is written to be eaten, and chewed again and again and to be digested in the brain,
    oh jv! what a brilliant cook of thoughts u r !
    just awesome, far beyond common down rated poems, we r glad to have read this one, thanks so much

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  18. Hitesh Dhola

    October 16, 2012 at 3:30 PM

    Wow.. a Poem…

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  19. pinal

    October 16, 2012 at 4:12 PM

    reading this poem wearing anti-flamed suit. Wonderful words n Mind blowing. hahahaha before reading i read ogling lava.

    તમને ખબર છે કે લાવાની નજીક દુનિયામાંથિ બહુ થોડા લોકો જ પહોચી શક્યા છે, એના કરતાં તો વધુ લોકો ચંદ્ર પર ગયા છે.

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  20. Karim

    October 16, 2012 at 6:22 PM

     
  21. pinal

    October 16, 2012 at 6:50 PM

    haru marathi pan ek kavita rachai gai. English -vinglish samjai j jashe.

    Destiny is Man
    and mans are like a Dog.
    It barks, n we have to run.
    to caught our dreams.

    he smokes and suffocate u.
    he is flattery but slapping too.
    he intrigue, n over wise.

    his seat is uncovered
    he is mischievous.
    he embarrassed u but
    u never know when he fucked u.

    Than after he left u, without
    any reason, any compensation.

    Again u r starting to survive
    in this obscene world.

    (lols of-course not a any kind of bug inside me.)

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  22. Jimit Vaidya

    October 16, 2012 at 8:36 PM

    જોરદાર છે બોસ.

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  23. Parth Veerendra

    October 16, 2012 at 8:58 PM

    hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

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  24. dipikaaqua

    October 17, 2012 at 5:28 PM

    Superb! “Shakespearean bug hidden in my bones!” Aah…
    “Words, words, mere words, no matter from the heart.” words of Shakespeare of course…;)
    Sihaeeyon mai uljhi padi
    Jeene ki ek aas hai…..:)

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  25. Hitesh Patel

    October 19, 2012 at 2:51 PM

    Brilliant sir…

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