Destiny is a lady,
fragile and frivolous;
a woman with volatile wings
and violent fangs !
she is alluring
naked and inviting
seducing the the mankind
hold their noses between her thighs
and while spreading odour of ecstasy ,
just close her crossed legs
to crush all heads tempted !
she loves
taste of dark sinful chocolates
and
surprises !
playing with innocent hearts
and preying tranquillized souls
dancing in cold night
with fire in her pout.
destiny is a lady
cruel and jealous
hungry and bloodthirsty
feeds herself
with human hopes,
and
always survives
on diet of smiles !
( this poem obviously bitten by Shakespearean bug hidden in my bones, suddenly erupted tonight after a line born in my FB status. Now i am ogling the lava here, so you may flamed by its random combustion… 😛 )
vandana
October 16, 2012 at 3:39 AM
good poem.
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rajnikant shah
October 16, 2012 at 7:07 AM
appreciate your frank opinions
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YASH
October 16, 2012 at 8:09 AM
too good sir ji…:)
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Mohsin Vasi
October 16, 2012 at 9:26 AM
destiny is your mind
some time cruel,some time kind
this depends on human hopes
and always act
what it thinks correct.
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vrajesh
October 16, 2012 at 9:34 AM
very dark truth
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shethsir
October 16, 2012 at 9:41 AM
The death of divine destiny is omnipotent,
Destined lives are deprived of divinity.
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priynikeeworld
October 16, 2012 at 9:43 AM
what an erotic, artistic and sarcastic poem !!!! destiny f…. all. crushed by destiny we can know our ownselves 😉
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Sayli Lande
October 16, 2012 at 9:55 AM
Very True.. Loved the last STANZA…..
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Tapan Shah
October 16, 2012 at 10:57 AM
50 % jevi samjani..navratri na diwaso mate barabar chhe..aa punchs
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jigisha79
October 16, 2012 at 11:35 AM
…nd still some ppl manage too f*#$ her.. !!
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teju144
October 16, 2012 at 11:50 AM
oh i m proud to be a lady !!!.. as i do share my feminism with d DESTINY…MAA DURGA MAA CHANDI CHAAMUNDI…RAMBHAA NE RATI BADHAAYE BHEGA AAVI GAYA AA KAVITA MA KYANK…BEAUTIFUL…
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Kunal Shah
October 16, 2012 at 12:48 PM
Outstanding Sir. How thoughtful you are.
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Karim
October 16, 2012 at 1:27 PM
yu can f**k her……. bt most of the time yu are getting F**kd……. hard fact…
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jigisha79
October 16, 2012 at 3:15 PM
noooo …its technically not possible…coz destiny is a lady !! 😀 ( just kidding pls dont mind 🙂
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maharshi
October 16, 2012 at 1:35 PM
nice and senseous poem. ‘saru chhe koi kattarpanthi aa photos joto nathi, nahintar m.f.hussain ni jem deshvatto karavat’
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Envy
October 16, 2012 at 2:11 PM
awesome is the only word came to mind 🙂 kudos and waiting for more…more…more
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Swati
October 16, 2012 at 2:28 PM
”she loves taste of dark sinful chocolates and surprises !”….What a beautiful line! ”….always survives on diet of smiles!”…..wah! Saras, taja ane raseela kalpano..carry on! 🙂
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Hardik Majithiya
October 16, 2012 at 3:02 PM
delicious is the word that comes in my mind after reading this poem because it is written to be eaten, and chewed again and again and to be digested in the brain,
oh jv! what a brilliant cook of thoughts u r !
just awesome, far beyond common down rated poems, we r glad to have read this one, thanks so much
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Hitesh Dhola
October 16, 2012 at 3:30 PM
Wow.. a Poem…
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pinal
October 16, 2012 at 4:12 PM
reading this poem wearing anti-flamed suit. Wonderful words n Mind blowing. hahahaha before reading i read ogling lava.
તમને ખબર છે કે લાવાની નજીક દુનિયામાંથિ બહુ થોડા લોકો જ પહોચી શક્યા છે, એના કરતાં તો વધુ લોકો ચંદ્ર પર ગયા છે.
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Karim
October 16, 2012 at 6:22 PM
review the following…..http://kap2awake.blogspot.in/2012/10/r-you-complicated-or-complex-or-else.html
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pinal
October 16, 2012 at 6:50 PM
haru marathi pan ek kavita rachai gai. English -vinglish samjai j jashe.
Destiny is Man
and mans are like a Dog.
It barks, n we have to run.
to caught our dreams.
he smokes and suffocate u.
he is flattery but slapping too.
he intrigue, n over wise.
his seat is uncovered
he is mischievous.
he embarrassed u but
u never know when he fucked u.
Than after he left u, without
any reason, any compensation.
Again u r starting to survive
in this obscene world.
(lols of-course not a any kind of bug inside me.)
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Jimit Vaidya
October 16, 2012 at 8:36 PM
જોરદાર છે બોસ.
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Parth Veerendra
October 16, 2012 at 8:58 PM
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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dipikaaqua
October 17, 2012 at 5:28 PM
Superb! “Shakespearean bug hidden in my bones!” Aah…
“Words, words, mere words, no matter from the heart.” words of Shakespeare of course…;)
Sihaeeyon mai uljhi padi
Jeene ki ek aas hai…..:)
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Hitesh Patel
October 19, 2012 at 2:51 PM
Brilliant sir…
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